Evaluation

Final Draft of our Ancillary

This is our final newspaper advert for our Ancillary as a group.

Final Draft of our Ancillary

This is our final draft for the double page spread as a group.

2nd Draft Ancillary

This is my second draft of my newspaper advert for our documentary...
My teacher said that I she did like the English Dictioray on the side, but she did not understand why I placed the other book next to it, and the background pitcure was not clear enough for the audience to understand what the documentary was about. Therefore for our final Ancillaries I will be working on the picture, that should be clear and to have a straight impact on our audience.

2nd Draft Ancillary

This is my second draft of my Double Page Spread, my teacher said that she did like the way I was trying to represent technology and English Language in the picture, however she said that it wasn't working with the text, also that I didn't need to put the documentary's title on the page.

1st Draft Ancillary

This is my first draft of my newspaper advert, the things my teacher told me to improve on were:
* Picure- not sending out the right message about the documentary
* Layout

She did like the angle of the picture, however I need to work on my picture

1st Draft Ancillary

This is my 1st draft of my double page spread,my teacher said that I should improve on the picture as it was not sending out the right message about my documentary, she also said that the way I placed the texts was not clear enough for the readers to understand. She told me that my double page spread did not loook like a real media product, that I didn't need to place the logo on the page, so these are the things I will be improving for my second draft...