1st Draft Ancillary

This is my 1st draft of my double page spread,my teacher said that I should improve on the picture as it was not sending out the right message about my documentary, she also said that the way I placed the texts was not clear enough for the readers to understand. She told me that my double page spread did not loook like a real media product, that I didn't need to place the logo on the page, so these are the things I will be improving for my second draft...