2nd Draft Ancillary

This is my second draft of my newspaper advert for our documentary...
My teacher said that I she did like the English Dictioray on the side, but she did not understand why I placed the other book next to it, and the background pitcure was not clear enough for the audience to understand what the documentary was about. Therefore for our final Ancillaries I will be working on the picture, that should be clear and to have a straight impact on our audience.