Evaluation

Final Draft of our Ancillary

This is our final newspaper advert for our Ancillary as a group.

Final Draft of our Ancillary

This is our final draft for the double page spread as a group.

2nd Draft Ancillary

This is my second draft of my newspaper advert for our documentary...
My teacher said that I she did like the English Dictioray on the side, but she did not understand why I placed the other book next to it, and the background pitcure was not clear enough for the audience to understand what the documentary was about. Therefore for our final Ancillaries I will be working on the picture, that should be clear and to have a straight impact on our audience.

2nd Draft Ancillary

This is my second draft of my Double Page Spread, my teacher said that she did like the way I was trying to represent technology and English Language in the picture, however she said that it wasn't working with the text, also that I didn't need to put the documentary's title on the page.