1st Draft Ancillary

This is my first draft of my newspaper advert, the things my teacher told me to improve on were:
* Picure- not sending out the right message about the documentary
* Layout

She did like the angle of the picture, however I need to work on my picture

1st Draft Ancillary

This is my 1st draft of my double page spread,my teacher said that I should improve on the picture as it was not sending out the right message about my documentary, she also said that the way I placed the texts was not clear enough for the readers to understand. She told me that my double page spread did not loook like a real media product, that I didn't need to place the logo on the page, so these are the things I will be improving for my second draft...

Research- Ancillary

Final Draft of our Documentary

Finally our final draft, a lot of work was put into this documentary and I'm quite happy with what we came up with. Looking back at our other drafts, we could clearly see the improvements made, the final documentary is not perfect but in my opinion it does send out the right message, it interacts with our target audience, it teaches everyone no matter what age different aspects of the language that they might not have come across before, there are different angles used throughout the documentary, the presenter had a balance with the language so that it was clear enough to all age groups who could possibly be interested in the topic, I also believe that the title given was understood when you watch the whole documentary and it makes people wanting to watch all the episodes.