Second Draft

This is our second draft, I must say that this was incomplete and it was not to our best standards. We need to improve by changing the beginning as it doesn't work, it is way too long and the audience will lose interest withing seconds of watching it. There was a problem with the sound which we need to sort out for our final draft, also there was not enough information (clearly because it was not complete).
However our teacher really liked the way we were using stop and start animation to interact more with our target audience, so we will continue to use that on our final draft.